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Band 6+: your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you. Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests

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Dear Shola,

I hope this letter finds you well. My name is Ogunlade Emmanuel, and I work as an accountant for the Medical Rehabilitation Therapists’ Board of Nigeria. I am writing to discuss with you, what I like doing during my free time.

Firstly, I love listening to music, particularly gospel music. This is because it inspires me and makes me to reflect on my pass, present, and focus on my goals. Whenever I listen to the gospel songs, I fill connected spirituality and begin to pray which has improved my prayer life. Additionally, I do play different indoor games such as ludo, draft, and card player etc. with my children, which has proven to enhance their intelligence.

However, I would appreciate it if you can share your hobbies and what interests you most during your leisure time.

Thank you for your time, and I hope to hear from you soon.

Best regards,

Emmanuel.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately fulfills the task by introducing the writer and describing their hobbies. However, it could benefit from a more engaging opening and a clearer structure to enhance the overall response to the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved with smoother transitions between paragraphs and ideas. Some sentences lack a strong connection to the preceding ones, impacting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate and mostly accurate, showing a good range of words. More precise and varied vocabulary could elevate the letter's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the letter demonstrates a range of grammatical structures, there are noticeable errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy will significantly enhance the overall score.

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