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Band 5+: Your english_speaking friend lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport writ email Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend Explain how your friend could learn this sport Suggest that you both learn this together

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Dear Sahar,

I hope this email finds you well and in good spirits. I am writing this email in response to your question that related to sports. I think you are best in tennis and you can able do it well. At first, you have adequate experience because we selected tennis when we were student in university. After that, you have pation about this sport and you are by far the most talented in it that I have ever seen. Moreover, tennis gym is closed to your home and you do not need to take a long way. I know a famouse tutor that can assist to you and she has taught profession students. Also, we can exercise with each other on weekend. Ultimately, I highly recommend do it with each other because l want to fill my free time with sports and I think you are the best person that I would like spend time with her for sports. Thanke you for your attention and patience. I am look forward seeing you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Maryam.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

sports: 3

tennis: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by recommending a sport, explaining how to learn it, and suggesting they learn it together. However, the response could be more concise and focused.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and sentence structure. Some sentences are awkwardly phrased, impacting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but the range could be expanded. More precise and varied word choices would enhance the letter's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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