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Band 6+: Your friend bought tickets to the theatre for both of you. Write a letter to a friend to tell him that you cannot go to theatre. In your letter -Apologize, -Explain the situation, -Tell him what he can do with the extra ticket.

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Dear Dildora

One of the main reasons why I am writing this letter is that I apologize from you. Because I will not go to the theatre.

Thank you for buying tickets for both of is. I will really apologize from you. I think I will not go to the theatre that day my motherʼs birthday. On 20th November is my momʼs birthday and I will not go to the theatre. That day my siblings and I will gi to the shop and buy present for my mother. And in the evening we will cook different food and birthday cake and we will decorate the living room for my mom. I will not have time to go to the theatre that day.

If you do not say no, use this ticket for your mother and take her to the theatre. Your mother will also be very happy.

I apologize again and I hope you understand me correctly. I look forward to your reply and I hope you will not upset.

Yours sincerely

Zilola Mahmudajnova

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

theatre: 4

apologize: 3

birthday: 3

mother: 3

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Task Response

The task is mostly addressed; however, the explanation could be more concise and the suggestion for the extra ticket is a bit abrupt.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and smoother transitions between ideas. The numerous grammatical errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise word choices would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

Grammatical errors are frequent and affect the clarity and fluency of the letter. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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