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Band 9: Your local community center is planning to offer a new course, and they have asked residents for suggestions. Write a letter to the community center suggesting a course you would like them to offer. You should include: - the name of the course and a brief description - why you think this course would be popular and useful for the community - any suggestions you have for the course, such as the time it should be offered and who should teach it.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to suggest a new course that I believe would be highly beneficial for our community – a Basic Computer Skills Course for beginners.

This course could cover essential topics such as using Microsoft Office, browsing the internet safely, sending emails, and online banking. Many residents, especially the elderly and those looking for new job opportunities, would greatly benefit from learning these skills.

In today’s world, computer literacy is becoming increasingly important for daily life and employment. Offering this course would help many people gain confidence in using technology and improve their career prospects. I am sure it would attract a large number of participants from different age groups.

I would suggest holding the classes in the evenings or on weekends so that working individuals can attend easily. It would also be ideal if the course could be taught by a local IT teacher or someone with experience in digital literacy training.

Thank you for considering my suggestion. I believe this course would make a positive difference in our community.

Yours faithfully,

M.G. Lasith Chamara

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Overall Band Score

9

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Task Response

9

The letter comprehensively addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear course suggestion with a rationale for its popularity and usefulness, along with practical suggestions for its implementation. The content is well-organized and relevant, demonstrating excellent communication skills.

Coherence & Cohesion

9

The letter is very well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphing is logical, and the transitions between ideas are smooth, contributing to a clear and coherent message.

Lexical Resource

8

The letter demonstrates a strong command of vocabulary, using a range of appropriate and precise words to convey the message effectively. The language is natural and sophisticated. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9

The letter exhibits excellent grammatical control, with a variety of sentence structures used accurately and appropriately. Punctuation is also handled well, contributing to the overall clarity and readability of the letter.

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