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Band 6+: Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with reference to an advert column on the Crowley times newspaper that was recently published, about awards to be given to individuals who have offered voluntary service to their various communities.

Emma was the first person that came to my mind when I first read through the column, he has stayed committed to supporting his community for 15 years.

Emma has consistently supported the local charity shop and food banks by spending 5 hour’s daily to offer assistance to people coming to the shops while also helping to pick up food from donors’ farms.

In my opinion I think he is deserving of the the King’s award for Voluntary service; which is the highest form of honour given to people of his calibre for their consistent contributions to the community.

I look forward to hearing from you soon and thanks for time

Your faithfully,

Adeh.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The suggestion is clear and well-explained. Minor improvements could enhance the overall impact.

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The letter's structure is generally logical, but some improvements in flow and paragraphing would enhance readability. The grammar errors affect the overall coherence.

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5.5

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4.5

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