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Band 4+: Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person

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Dear Madam,

I hope you would be great.

I am writing to make a suggestion about who might be eligiable for enviromental award due to her ambitions work in the community.

I supposed that Alya should get award as her humble personality and her very supportive approaches for heavy workloads . She aspires us to tackle policy issues especially ISO 2001 enviromental prospective. I could not dream of without her to finish this community project.

On the other hand, as I mentioned before she has really less opinion of herself due to that fussy gift can be precious for her. Maybe a tiny tree or small forest heritage which can be sembol of teeming of living creatures even people.

I hope my advices would be beneficial for deciding people.

I am sure hard working never pay off and should be encrouge people .

Thanks in advance.

Best wishes

Word Count: 148

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task requirements by suggesting someone for the award, describing their contributions, and suggesting an appropriate award. However, there are some areas for improvement. The letter could benefit from more specific examples of Alya's work and a clearer explanation of how her actions benefit the community. Additionally, the suggested award could be more concrete and directly linked to her contributions. Some sentences are a bit awkward and could be rephrased for better clarity. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more explicit transitions between your points to guide the reader. For example, when transitioning from describing Alya's contributions to suggesting an award, a clearer link would enhance coherence. Paragraphing could also be improved to separate distinct ideas more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more precise and varied. While words like 'ambitions,' 'humble,' and 'supportive' are relevant, exploring synonyms or more descriptive language could enrich the letter. For instance, instead of 'heavy workloads,' you could specify the types of tasks Alya handles. Also, 'fussy gift' is unclear; consider rephrasing for clarity.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and impact clarity. Correcting sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and subject-verb agreement is crucial. For example, 'I hope you would be great' should be 'I hope you are doing well.' Also, 'eligiable' should be 'eligible,' and 'enviromental' should be 'environmental.' Proofreading carefully and focusing on basic grammar rules will improve accuracy.

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