Band 5: Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. write a letter to the librarian. In your letter:describe what you like about the librarysay what you do not like , and make suggestions for improvements (User-Written IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample)

Dear Sir or Mardam,

I am writing to give you my feedback from the questions you asked about the improvements I would make in the library.

Firstly, I would like to hightligh what I do like about the library. One thing I really love is how spacious and big the library is. It has different rooms based on the book cathegory, sofas and large tables where you can enjoy your reading. Furthermor the decoration is absolutly amazing. Every room as different decorations based on the cathegory of the book such as romance, mistery, fiction, ect.

Sadly, I must admit that a do not like the lightning on the library. In my opinion, it is very poor and sometimes it makes reading a tought task because you cannot see well.

I believe it would be great to change the lightning on the library for another one brighter. Besides, it would be lovely to have more natural light and maybe, more little lamps over the library in case you need it.

Hope this suggestion would help. Let me know if you need anything else.

Kind regards,

Ana.

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