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Band 4+: Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. write a letter to the librarian. In your letter:describe what you like about the librarysay what you do not like , and make suggestions for improvements

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Dear Sir/Madam,

Trust this message finds you well. I am writing to give my opinion on how best to improve the library facilities for the benefit of students and society.

The location of the library and building structure at the heart of Lagos is a sight to behold , with its height for proper visibility to incoming and outgoing tourist. Thereby, giving proper accesibility to all. However, the management have to do better by providing a well maintained and condusive environment for studying.

Furthermore, air conditioners , CCtv cameras and historian books will be helpful to make the enviroment condusive for learning.

Thank you for your cooperation.

your sincerly ,,

Adedeji Abisola

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

4.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the suggestions for improvement could be more detailed and specific. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's organization and flow could be improved. Some sentences lack a clear connection to the preceding ones, impacting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated vocabulary would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Grammatical errors and inaccuracies are present and affect the overall clarity and fluency of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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