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Band 5+: Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. write a letter to the librarian. In your letter:describe what you like about the librarysay what you do not like , and make suggestions for improvements

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a member of this public library, since 10 years. I am writing to share some insights to improve the library services and facilities.

The space of layout for readers are really good, that is the main reason of my membership. It is really convenient for users; it makes us comfortable to read, and it has a cozy environment.

Even though, I am dissatisfied about the opening timings (9-5 p.m). As a tutor, I have been encountering an issue due to this; it is difficult for me to gather materials during these hours. I have only off on weekends, but the library is closed on every weekend.

As a member of this library, I would like to share some suggestions likes; please consider openings on weekends for few hours, because it is very helpful to the users, like me. Apart from that, the provision of more computers for the members is a good option to attract other people to choose a membership.

Yours faithfully,

Mariya C. J.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

library: 4

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The suggestions are relevant and clear. Minor improvements could be made to the overall structure and clarity to achieve a higher score.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally easy to follow, but the flow could be improved with smoother transitions between ideas. Some sentences lack conciseness, impacting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, demonstrating a good range of words. More precise and sophisticated vocabulary could enhance the overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter conveys the message, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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