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Band 4+: Your neighbor has been consistently parking their car in a way that blocks part of your driveway, causing inconvenience. Write a letter to your neighbor explaining the issue and suggesting a possible solution. You should include details about: - When and how often this has been happening - How this is affecting you and your household - A polite suggestion for how they could park differently in the future

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Hii suresh

I hope this message finds you well. I am writing this email to bring your attention towards the issues related to your car parking.as we purchased flat before 2 years ago and that time builder’s promise to all householder to arrange separate parking area for vahicle. But till now he didn’t manage any area where we can park our vahicle due to this many society members avoid to buy and type of vahicle. And before 3 days you purchase fortuner and daily parking in front of my door that leads to block my passage area and my family facing many issues due to blocking of passage. Yesterday night i have to remove my refrigerator fromy home for repairing but we did not able to extract due to shortage of area and in future it also create problem in case of any emergency if we didn’t find the solution for this issue. So i request you to arrange the meeting and discuss to resolve this issue as soon as possible because now i also plan to buy activa because my company suspended the bus service due to this i travelling daily in local train due to rush inside train i face saffocation issues that’s leads to my breathing problems so now it will become urgent to purchase activa that i can used for reach my office. But due to parking shortage i am not purchasing so i request you to gather all society member after maghrib and keep all this issues and try to find solutions as soon as possible.

Thank you.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

issues: 4

parking: 3

vahicle: 3

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Task Response

The letter attempts to address the task but includes irrelevant information about the builder's promises and your plans to buy an Activa. The explanation of how the parking affects you is somewhat clear, but the proposed solution is vague and focuses more on a general society meeting rather than a specific solution to the parking issue. To improve, focus on directly addressing the neighbor about their parking habits, clearly state the inconvenience it causes, and propose a specific solution like parking elsewhere or agreeing on a schedule.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization could be improved for clarity. Consider structuring your points more logically, perhaps dedicating a paragraph to each main point (the problem, the impact, and the proposed solution). Using clearer transitions between ideas would also enhance readability. For example, you could start a new paragraph when you transition from describing the parking issue to explaining its impact on your family.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and contains inaccuracies ('vahicle' instead of 'vehicle,' 'saffocation' instead of 'suffocation'). Expanding your vocabulary and ensuring correct spelling will improve the clarity and impact of your writing. Try to use more precise language to describe the issues and proposed solutions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and sentence structure problems. For example, 'builder's promise' should be 'builder promised'. Focus on using correct grammar and punctuation to enhance clarity. Review basic grammar rules and practice constructing simple and complex sentences accurately.

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