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Band 5+: Your neighbor has been consistently parking their car in a way that blocks part of your driveway, causing inconvenience. Write a letter to your neighbor explaining the issue and suggesting a possible solution. You should include details about: - When and how often this has been happening - How this is affecting you and your household - A polite suggestion for how they could park differently in the future

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Dear Flavio

I hope you are doing well. I want to talk about the blocking of access in front of my driveway several times recently. According to the issue, I suggest that you can organize another proper place for parking your car because every day I go to work with my car and I have difficult access.

When I go to work with my car, sometimes I see another car in front of the driveway. Therefore, I suggest my neighbor take a good decision for parking the car in another proper place.

I would like to suggest to you that you can rent a garage as a safe place near your home for the sake of no complaints or generating difficult situations, and also to be happy every time.

Thank you very much for considering my suggest. I am looking forward to you prompt response.

Your sisncerely.

Erick Diaz

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

suggest: 4

another: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by explaining the problem and suggesting a solution, but it lacks specific details about the instances when the parking occurred. The tone is polite, but the content is somewhat repetitive and could be more developed. To improve, provide concrete examples of when the parking issues happened (dates, times) and explore alternative parking solutions more thoroughly. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the points are not developed well. To improve coherence, try to present your points in a more logical order. For example, start by clearly stating the problem, then provide specific instances, and finally suggest solutions. Using transition words and phrases can also help to connect your ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite basic and repetitive. To enhance your lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary that is more specific and appropriate for the context. For example, instead of 'good decision,' you could use 'suitable alternative.' Also, avoid repeating the same words and phrases too often.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving your sentence structure and using correct verb tenses. For example, the sentence 'According to the issue, I suggest that you can organize another proper place for parking your car because every day I go to work with my car and I have difficult access' is grammatically awkward and unclear. Try to break it down into simpler, more accurate sentences. Also, pay attention to punctuation and spelling.

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