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Band 7+: Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter Explain the reason for the noise Apologize Describe what action you will take

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Dear Larry,

How are you doing, I got a letter from you yesterday, saying that the noise from my house flat during the day is “extreme” and I understand you completely. That is the reason why I’m writing back.

If you recall correctly, this new development started 2 weeks ago, because my elder sister dropped off her kids with mine for the holidays. It has been such a difficult job controlling 6 young champs all alone, that I didn’t notice the extent of their noise.

I sincerely want to apologise to you especially, since you are my immediate neighbour and have been so accommodating and nice to my family and I. I promise to speak to them first thing tomorrow morning and also keep them busy to reduce their play time. Even though they love to enjoy their afternoons, I will ensure that they take a nap at mid-day to avoid disturbance.

Once again, I’m sorry for the inconvenience, and hope to have a great chat with you at the Christmas barbeque as usual.

Thanks.

Sarah.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter appropriately satisfies all requirements of the task. The explanation for the noise is clear, a sincere apology is offered, and specific actions to mitigate the noise are described. The tone is suitable for the context, and the letter is well-organized and easy to understand.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The purpose of the letter is immediately clear, and each paragraph addresses a specific aspect of the task. Transitions between ideas are mostly smooth, contributing to a coherent flow. To further enhance coherence, consider using more varied cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs, making the connections between ideas even clearer.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, appropriate for the task. Words and phrases such as 'extreme,' 'accommodating,' and 'inconvenience' are used effectively. To further improve, try incorporating more specific or nuanced vocabulary related to noise and disturbance, and explore synonyms to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar with a mix of simple and complex sentences. There are a few minor errors, but they do not significantly impede understanding. To enhance grammatical accuracy, carefully review sentence structures and pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage. Proofreading can help identify and correct these minor errors.

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