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The question of what age children should go to school is debated, with some citing their tender age, whereas others cite the children’s inability to go to school until maturity. I believe there are preliminary perspectives to be addressed.

On the one hand, youths should go to school at a young age. In an era characterized by various reasonable factors, if children go to school in their early years, ๐ญ๐ก๐ž๐ข๐ซ ๐œ๐จ๐ ๐ง๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐ฏ๐ž ๐š๐›๐ข๐ฅ๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐ž๐ฌ ๐๐ž๐ฏ๐ž๐ฅ๐จ๐ฉ ๐Ÿ๐š๐ฌ๐ญ๐ž๐ซ ๐œ๐จ๐ฆ๐ฉ๐š๐ซ๐ž๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ ๐จ๐ข๐ง๐  ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐œ๐ก๐จ๐จ๐ฅ ๐š๐ญ ๐š ๐ฅ๐š๐ญ๐ž๐ซ ๐š๐ ๐ž, ๐š๐ญ ๐ฐ๐ก๐ข๐œ๐ก ๐ญ๐ข๐ฆ๐ž ๐ญ๐ก๐ž๐ข๐ซ ๐ก๐ข๐ ๐ก๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐š๐๐š๐ฉ๐ญ๐š๐›๐ฅ๐ž ๐›๐ซ๐š๐ข๐ง๐ฌ ๐ซ๐ž๐š๐๐ข๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ซ๐ž๐œ๐ž๐ข๐ฏ๐ž ๐ข๐ง๐Ÿ๐จ๐ซ๐ฆ๐š๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง. ๐„๐ฆ๐ฉ๐ก๐š๐ฌ๐ข๐ณ๐ข๐ง๐  ๐ฎ๐ง๐๐ž๐ซ๐ฌ๐ญ๐š๐ง๐๐ข๐ง๐  ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐›๐ฃ๐ž๐œ๐ญ๐ฌ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ž ๐ซ๐ž๐š๐๐ข๐ง๐  ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฆ๐š๐ญ๐ก ๐œ๐จ๐ง๐œ๐ž๐ฉ๐ญ๐ฌ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ข๐ง๐๐ž๐ž๐ ๐š ๐Ÿ๐š๐œ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ ๐œ๐จ๐ง๐ญ๐ซ๐ข๐›๐ฎ๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐  ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐š๐ซ๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐  ๐ฌ๐œ๐ก๐จ๐จ๐ฅ ๐š๐ญ ๐š๐ง ๐ž๐š๐ซ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐š๐ ๐ž. ๐ˆ๐ง ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐ซ๐ž๐ ๐š๐ซ๐, ๐œ๐ก๐ข๐ฅ๐๐ซ๐ž๐ง ๐ฅ๐ž๐š๐ซ๐ง ๐ฆ๐จ๐ซ๐ž, ๐ข๐ง๐ญ๐ž๐ซ๐š๐œ๐ญ ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก ๐ญ๐ก๐ž๐ข๐ซ ๐ฉ๐ž๐ž๐ซ๐ฌ, ๐š๐ง๐ ๐๐ž๐ฏ๐ž๐ฅ๐จ๐ฉ ๐ญ๐ก๐ž๐ข๐ซ ๐œ๐จ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ง๐ข๐œ๐š๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง ๐š๐ง๐ ๐œ๐จ๐จ๐ฉ๐ž๐ซ๐š๐ญ๐ข๐ฏ๐ž ๐ฌ๐ค๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฌ.

๐„๐ฆ๐ฉ๐ก๐š๐ฌ๐ข๐ณ๐ข๐ง๐  ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐š๐ฌ ๐š ๐๐ž๐œ๐ข๐ฌ๐ข๐ฏ๐ž ๐Ÿ๐š๐œ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ ๐œ๐š๐ง ๐›๐ž ๐ข๐ง๐ž๐Ÿ๐Ÿ๐ž๐œ๐ญ๐ข๐ฏ๐ž ๐š๐ญ ๐ญ๐ข๐ฆ๐ž๐ฌ. ๐“๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐›๐ž๐œ๐š๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ž ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐ž ๐œ๐ก๐ข๐ฅ๐๐ซ๐ž๐ง ๐ฆ๐š๐ฒ ๐ง๐จ๐ญ ๐›๐ž ๐ซ๐ž๐š๐๐ฒ ๐Ÿ๐จ๐ซ ๐ญ๐ก๐ž ๐ฌ๐œ๐ก๐จ๐จ๐ฅ ๐œ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ซ๐ข๐œ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ฎ๐ฆ, ๐š๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ž๐ฒ ๐ฆ๐š๐ฒ ๐ง๐จ๐ญ ๐›๐ž ๐š๐›๐ฅ๐ž ๐ญ๐จ ๐Ÿ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ฎ๐ง๐๐ž๐ซ๐ฌ๐ญ๐š๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ญ. ๐“๐ก๐ž๐ฒ ๐ฆ๐š๐ฒ ๐ฅ๐š๐œ๐ค ๐œ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐œ๐š๐ฅ ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ง๐ค๐ข๐ง๐  ๐š๐ง๐ ๐ฉ๐ซ๐จ๐›๐ฅ๐ž๐ฆ-๐ฌ๐จ๐ฅ๐ฏ๐ข๐ง๐  ๐ฌ๐ค๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฌ, ๐ฅ๐ž๐š๐๐ข๐ง๐  ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ซ๐ž๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐š๐ง๐ ๐ฉ๐ฎ๐ง๐ข๐ฌ๐ก๐ฆ๐ž๐ง๐ญ ๐Ÿ๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ญ๐ฎ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฌ ๐š๐ง๐ ๐ฉ๐š๐ซ๐ž๐ง๐ญ๐ฌ. ๐ˆ๐Ÿ ๐œ๐ก๐ข๐ฅ๐๐ซ๐ž๐ง ๐ ๐จ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐œ๐ก๐จ๐จ๐ฅ ๐ฅ๐š๐ญ๐ž๐ซ, ๐ญ๐ก๐ž๐ฒ ๐ฆ๐š๐ฒ ๐›๐ž ๐ฆ๐จ๐ซ๐ž ๐ฉ๐ซ๐ž๐ฉ๐š๐ซ๐ž๐ ๐ž๐ฆ๐จ๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐š๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐š๐ง๐ ๐ฆ๐ž๐ง๐ญ๐š๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐Ÿ๐จ๐ซ ๐š๐œ๐š๐๐ž๐ฆ๐ข๐œ ๐œ๐ก๐š๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ž๐ง๐ ๐ž๐ฌ, ๐ซ๐ž๐๐ฎ๐œ๐ข๐ง๐  ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ซ๐ž๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐š๐ง๐ ๐๐ž๐ฏ๐ž๐ฅ๐จ๐ฉ๐ข๐ง๐  ๐œ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐œ๐š๐ฅ ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ง๐ค๐ข๐ง๐  ๐ฌ๐ค๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฌ. ๐Œ๐ฒ ๐›๐ซ๐จ๐ญ๐ก๐ž๐ซ ๐ฐ๐ž๐ง๐ญ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐œ๐ก๐จ๐จ๐ฅ ๐›๐ž๐Ÿ๐จ๐ซ๐ž ๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐š๐ ๐ž, ๐›๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ก๐ž ๐š๐ฅ๐ฐ๐š๐ฒ๐ฌ ๐ ๐จ๐ญ ๐ก๐ข๐ ๐ก ๐ ๐ซ๐š๐๐ž๐ฌ ๐ข๐ง ๐ž๐ฏ๐ž๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐›๐ฃ๐ž๐œ๐ญโ€”๐š ๐ฉ๐ž๐ซ๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ž๐ง๐ญ ๐ž๐ฑ๐š๐ฆ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐ž, ๐ฐ๐ก๐ข๐œ๐ก ๐ฆ๐ž๐š๐ง๐ฌ ๐ญ๐ก๐š๐ญ ๐œ๐ก๐ข๐ฅ๐๐ซ๐ž๐ง ๐ฌ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ ๐จ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐œ๐ก๐จ๐จ๐ฅ ๐ฐ๐ก๐ž๐ง ๐ญ๐ก๐ž๐ฒ ๐š๐ซ๐ž ๐ฉ๐ซ๐ž๐ฉ๐š๐ซ๐ž๐ ๐Ÿ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ข๐ญ๐ฎ๐š๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐œ๐ก ๐š๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ซ๐ž๐ฌ๐ฌ, ๐š๐ง๐ฑ๐ข๐ž๐ญ๐ฒ, ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฉ๐ฎ๐ง๐ข๐ฌ๐ก๐ฆ๐ž๐ง๐ญ.

๐‡๐š๐ฏ๐ข๐ง๐  ๐œ๐จ๐ง๐ฌ๐ข๐๐ž๐ซ๐ž๐ ๐ฏ๐š๐ซ๐ฒ๐ข๐ง๐  ๐ฏ๐ข๐ž๐ฐ๐ฌ, ๐ˆ ๐œ๐จ๐ง๐œ๐ฅ๐ฎ๐๐ž ๐ญ๐ก๐š๐ญ ๐ž๐ฏ๐ž๐ง ๐ญ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ ๐ก ๐œ๐ก๐ข๐ฅ๐๐ซ๐ž๐ง ๐ฐ๐ก๐จ ๐ ๐จ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐œ๐ก๐จ๐จ๐ฅ ๐š๐ญ ๐š๐ง ๐ž๐š๐ซ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐š๐ ๐ž ๐ฆ๐š๐ฒ ๐๐ž๐ฏ๐ž๐ฅ๐จ๐ฉ ๐œ๐จ๐ ๐ง๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐ฏ๐ž ๐š๐›๐ข๐ฅ๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐ž๐ฌ ๐Ÿ๐š๐ฌ๐ญ๐ž๐ซ, ๐จ๐ญ๐ก๐ž๐ซ ๐œ๐ก๐ข๐ฅ๐๐ซ๐ž๐ง ๐ฌ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ ๐จ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐œ๐ก๐จ๐จ๐ฅ ๐š๐ญ ๐š ๐ฅ๐š๐ญ๐ž๐ซ ๐š๐ ๐ž ๐›๐ž๐œ๐š๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ž ๐จ๐Ÿ ๐š ๐ฅ๐š๐œ๐ค ๐จ๐Ÿ ๐œ๐จ๐ฆ๐ฉ๐ซ๐ž๐ก๐ž๐ง๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง.

Word Count: 283

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
๐ญ๐จ: 10
๐ฌ๐œ๐ก๐จ๐จ๐ฅ: 8
๐š๐ง๐: 8
๐š๐ญ: 6
๐œ๐ก๐ข๐ฅ๐๐ซ๐ž๐ง: 6
๐š๐ ๐ž: 5
๐ฆ๐š๐ฒ: 5
school: 4
๐ญ๐ก๐ž๐ข๐ซ: 4
๐›๐ž: 4
๐ ๐จ: 4
๐๐ž๐ฏ๐ž๐ฅ๐จ๐ฉ: 3
๐ฅ๐š๐ญ๐ž๐ซ: 3
๐Ÿ๐จ๐ซ: 3
๐ญ๐ก๐ž๐ฒ: 3
๐ฌ๐ญ๐ซ๐ž๐ฌ๐ฌ: 3
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Task Response

6
The essay presents both sides of the argument but the conclusion is somewhat weak and doesn't fully synthesize the discussion. The response is relevant but could benefit from a more developed and balanced consideration of the different viewpoints.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The essay's structure is generally clear, but the flow is disrupted in places. The use of cohesive devices is inconsistent, and some transitions between ideas could be smoother. Grammar errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5
The essay demonstrates a sufficient range of vocabulary, but there is room for improvement in the precision and sophistication of word choice. Some vocabulary is used inappropriately. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5
While the essay attempts to use a range of grammatical structures, there are noticeable errors that affect the clarity and fluency. Accuracy needs significant improvement.

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In the developed era, there is an ongoing debate among individuals that the government should take financial responsibility to set up large sculptures and monuments in public places for enjoyments of individuals. I completely disagree with this statement, and I will explain my opinions giving valid reasons in the following paragraphs. One of the majority […]

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Some people believe that social media has a negative impact on real-life communication skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some citizens think that social media has a negative effect on communication between people. While excessive screen time can cause isolation, I completely disagree with this view, as social media actually brings significant advantages to modern communication. The social media allows individuals to maintain instant communication with friends and family across the globe. Platforms like […]

Band 6+

Some people believe that it is better to live in a house than in an apartment. Others think that living in an apartment is more convenient. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays people have the opportunity to live both in a house and in an apartment with a lot of benefits. Personally, I think that when a person chooses where to live he or she needs to pay attention to their personal conditions instead of relying on others experience. Although countryside does not have a surplus […]

Band 6+

In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have different views as to whether young people who commit serious crimes should receive the same punishment as adults. While some argue that equal punishment is necessary, I disagree with this view, as young offenders lack the psychological maturity to fully comprehend the consequences of their actions. First, it is widely acknowledged that young […]

Band 8+

Some people point out that it is better to buy local products than to buy imported products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that citizens should only eat sourced produce rather than imported food. I truly believe that government should not stop the import of nutrition. Not only can it be detrimental for economy, but it also bad for ordinary civils, because not every country is able to grow all the species of food due […]

Band 6+

Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drinks that are scientifically proven to be bad for people's health. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is often argued that retail outlets should be prohibited from selling food and beverages that are scientifically proven to be detrimental to human health. I strongly agree with this view as restricting access to such products could help prevent health problems,encourage people to adopt healthier lifestyles and protect vulnerable consumers from manipulative marketing. The […]

Band 8+
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