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Cause And Solution

Band 5+: Essay topic: Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popular tree in the contemporary word. Causes and solutions?

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Despite enormous opportunities for gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is becoming significantly common in the modern life among individuals. This essay will examine the primary reasons behind this problem and provide relevant solutions to address it.

there are greater opportunities to encourage individual for a healthy lifestyle rather a sedentary lifestyle. However, these opportunities are not available for everyone due to financial issues. Many gym centers want minimum €100 monthly which is pretty expensive for students and people who have low income so ,they do not afford to pay gym membership monthly and prefer to stay home .additionally , some people are not aware the importance of a healthy body and lifestyle .in that case ,they did not pay attention for looking at gym center and choose a secondary lifestyle.

Government plays a crucial role to address this issue because if government provides a financial support to people who have low income, it will be definitely a positive impact on people’s health. Many surveys with students about the gym centers indicate that they are looking forward to get financial aid from the government for paying gym membership. Also, government must provide beneficial informations about health and healthy lifestyle to people who do not know the importance of this situation. If they know, they will change their mind and give more attention to the problems related with health.

In conclusion, expensive membership costs and lack of information about the health may lead to choose a sedentary lifestyle. However, if government provide a financial support for individuals and encourage them to learn more beneficial information about the health, this problem’s negative side can be mitigated.

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