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Band 5+: High school is a crucial period in the life of young people. What factors are related to academic success in high school students? Write at least 250 words.

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In contemporary society, the achievements of youngsters people on High school are dependent on many factors. This notice is nowadays a substantial debate. Therefore, in my essay, I contribute two primary factors, which enhance a chance to gain higher success, such as personal contribution, and social attributes.

Teenage is the most complicated season in life, which should be influenced by close people, such as friends, schoolmates, and family, who could help improve educational perceptions. Sometimes ‘true friends’ can support a young person in the wrong way and this can lead to sliding down. For example, my daughter and her best friend have been overplaying games and tried the first innocent marihuana. This could be harmful to her brain. However, from my position as a doctor, I noticed immediately the bigger eyes and I took action, which consisted of psychological visits and cooperation by specialists. As a consequence, the social factor is crucial for the right development of personality, therefore parents have to be responsible for their children.

The second paramount factor is the personal persuasiveness of youngsters. This is related to their own effort and self-discipline. Moreover, it depends on the setting their goals, which they want to achieve in the future. For instance, research from March 2024 provides outcomes that it is more important to not give up trying to do some activities than to have a talent or predisposition. A good example is Maria Carry. She loved singing; however, she have been deft. Her inner feelings pushed her to make an effort and constantly try to sing, which helped her in secondary voice school and finally, at this time she is one of the most famous singers in the world.

In conclusion, success can be achieved by your persuasion with a small support of people, who love you and depend on you. Cooperation with them and constant effort should have a significant impact on obtaining these goals. Therefore, it is necessary to look after family and friends’ relationships and be a person with dreams, which can be true.

Word Count: 340

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