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Band 8+: In many countries, young adults are engaged in some kinds of work. Some people regard this as completely wrong. Others consider it as a valuable experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both views

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There is an ongoing debate about whether children should engage in various forms of employment or be refrained from work until they are old enough. In my opinion, children should be encouraged to work, provided that it does not subject them to mental or physical harm. Age-appropriate employment can foster a sense of responsibility and a feeling of self-reliance.

The first aspect worth considering is how children engaged in employment develop a sense of responsibility, which is vital for personal and professional improvement. Firstly, children who are exposed to accountability and liability and put in charge master execution which equips them with the skills that are crucial in the real world. These experiences are almost unattainable by merely studying from books. For instance, a teenager working as an accountant at their family’s restaurant may grasp financial responsibility that helps them to make better financial decisions.

Another equally important reason is the development of self-sufficiency. Initially, financial freedom, independent decision-making, and responsibility associated with employment enhance a feeling of self-reliance. Likewise, competence in these aspects stimulates crisis handling capability from a young age which results in practical exposure to real-life scenarios. For example, a young person who earns by themselves by working a part-time job at a local grocery store might become more resourceful and independent which otherwise takes years to build.

To sum up, working from a young age while ensuring children’s well-being offers numerous benefits that contribute to a prosperous adult life. Consequently, employment at a young age can help them develop a feeling of responsibility and self-reliance, if their education and well-being are not put in jeopardy.

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