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Band 4+: In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Every countries have their own goals and purpose in developing and adapt with the advancement of technology. In order to accomplish a great things country often sacrificecing a few things in order to achieve or passing other nation advancement. Indonesia i believe are one of the countries that really focusing their student advancing the education side because based on what i read yesterdey, i saw that education data of citizens in Indonesia comparing with other asians country, Indonesia is far left behind . Therefore, the ministry wanted to solve the problem by providing good university and pusshing the scholarship, and with the competitiveness they expect a better improvement. Thats why there is a lot of younger student that work hard with a lot of pressure in their back such as internship,aprentice, part-time working and other, However they must put aside their free time so they can be successful to be a great individuals and bring impact to the society with their skillset.

Its good to have a challengging circle,it can bring a gigantic effect, but i believe there is always an cause with this habits. Firstly, student frequently forgot to contacted their families, I believe that the family is always number one in every situation, so to give information nowadays its a very crucial. Secondly, forgot to work out, so lots of young people when their studies they usually forgot to move around and think about their health. Thirdly, young student are to depressed, basicly this happens then they had a lot of pressure from families, studies, and relation. And when this happen studen often goes negative activities.

As far as iam concerned, One of the solution by the government is to give a day for break to student or younger people. For instance,every facilities or universities must be closed in a weekdays. Within this theory i believe it can solve the pressure that younger student had and increase their leisure time to do something that can explore their creativeness in order to maintain their mental health. This method is used by the scandinavian people, and when they used this method, there is a real proof of this, andits actually working, based on the world judgement, its clear that norwegia or finland is one of the most happy Nation.

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