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Positive And Negative

Band 5+: nowadays fathers are taking care of the children and mothers are working. is this positive or negative changing. i will write about this topic and you will rate in ielts

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In recent years, we have witnessed that the responsibilities of parents are being replaced as fathers and mothers are doing each other’s role in the family. If we look this changing through modern eyes, it might be a good idea, however, it becomes an inappropriate idea if we look it from traditional perspective.

As we know that, this kind of system has been working quite well in developed countries and economy growth is noticeable. Clearly, this is a great example that the potential of girls are higher than expected and girls’ role in society is underrated. Furthermore, children’s fear from their fathers also works really well as fathers are taking care of them. in teenage years, boys start behaving pretty badly to their mothers as mothers are not able to stop their sons. As a result, teenagers might enter to dark sides and a few wrong decisions can ruin their whole life. Fortunately, fathers are not letting it happen and we would also see lower crime rates. .

However, it is not all about developments, but also we should save our traditions. What i mean by this is that the roles of mothers and fathers haven’t been changed in the history of mankind. So ” Fathers go to work and mothers stay at home and take care of children” system is not just specific nation’s part of traditions, but also it is whole world’s. we do not have rights to stop this as people have been living for thousands of years and also continue to live in the future.

As a conclusion, even though there are variety of benefits of this idea, i should say that saving tradition is more essential than other factors and our priority is saving and showing our historical traditions to future generation.

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