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Band 5+: People should not work too hard– they should remember importance of leisure activities.

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Some people think that they do not should work too hard, while others are trying their best for it. In this essay, I am going to explain why people should not forget the importance of leisure activities.

The first thing that should be mentioned is that hard working makes people professional and faultless. For example, people who have difficulties with working on a computer if practice on it, they become more ideal. In addition, nowadays some of teenagers believe that going through challenges, difficulties make them stronger, smarter, more clever. Moreover, they think if they work hard, study hard, and do their best now, they will not face challenges and difficult situations in the future. The one thing I have to add is that if they start to work earlier, they might not have problems with finance in the future. The last thing I want to mention is that older people and adults are still working hard because they want their children to live in better life without financial issues.

However, on the other hand, it is not as good as they think. Statistics show that people whose time is well-balanced, like 8 hours sleep, 10 hours or 12 hours of working, and leisure time for hobbies or some types of activities, are more healthier, have better mental well-beingIn addition, they are far from stress or depression. For example, they work, come home, spend time with their family, and sleep well. Moreover, their children feel loved by their parents. It helps them to be more confident and self-loved ones.

To sum up, having free time and spend it doing leisure activities is important for live happy, satisfied, and healthy life.

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