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Band 5+: Some believe that professional success depends largely on obtaining a good education, while others contend that personal talent and drive are more significant. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Educating well helps people to achieve their goals and be successful while others suppose that it is more important to possess talent and motivation. Although both schools of thought offer merit, I agree with the former and this essay explores both of views behind this issues.

On the one hand, it is extremely lucky for individuals to have talent and be self-motivated because not all people possess it. Provided that they are hard-working and persistent enough to practice and hone the skills, they can easily achieve success in their expert field. Moreover, as the rapid development of technology and market, it is not only knowledge but also having flexibility and experience to thrive in their career, as a result, they gain the upper hand over somebody. For example, many media companies are likely to enroll some influencers who have talkative and communication skills.

On the other hand, opponents of the previous view that to be successful is the result of good education. First and formore, these types of individuals tend to take part in university training courses, possess qualifications and find jobs after leaving. This leads to help them comprehend numerous knowledge and skills on how to handle and overcome the difficulties in their occupation. As a result, they keep up with success in the route of career, regardless of special talent. Furthermore, several professional jobs such as doctor, teachers require many qualifications which are so significant to be received for these jobs. Even, they must learn carefully and overcome some exams to judge the level due to having mistakes that it leads to affect seriously to other people.

In conclusion, talent and motivation are important factors for success, however good education helps individuals to apply for certain jobs and have enough confidence to work when they are rich of knowledge about these fields.

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