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Band 7+: some parents encourage their children to take part of an organised group activities in their free time or rather occupy themselves to learn it on their own

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Nowadays, some parents encourage their children to participate in organized group activities in their free time, while others prefer that they occupy themselves by learning independently. In this essay, I will discuss both views, allowing for a thorough analysis and differentiation between the two.

Allowing children to join organized group activities has its advantages. For one, these activities provide a structured list of things to do, along with specific times and dates allocated for each event. This structure saves parents considerable time in searching for other participants, as many of these organized activities already have members with similar interests.

On the other hand, letting children occupy their free time independently may present some disadvantages. Children today can easily become distracted by various other activities. Moreover, they often struggle to find partners or members who share their specific interests or goals. Additionally, some children may lack the confidence to speak in public, making it challenging for them to engage with peers.

Based on my experience living here in the Philippines, parents often invest in group activities or seminars for their children. They do this because they feel assured of the safety, the qualifications of the instructors, and the structured nature of these programs.

In conclusion, allowing children to join organized group activities is more beneficial than letting them engage in activities on their own during their free time.

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