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Band 4+: Some people believe that government should pay too much attention to sports and pay little attention to education and health. Do you agree or disagree?

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Many researchers have sounded alarming bells about the sport. I agree that some individuals think that the authority ought to pay more attention to sports rather than an education and health. In the following essay, my ideas will be presented before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.

Mainly, doing exercises constantly is help us to be healthy and keep our body from being fat. If there is no problems wih our health, human’s brain functions very well. As a result, our education uplift by the way. That is why some people prefer that government should more fund on sport. We take Japanese people as an example. In Japan, each person train karate, taekwando, kung fu and other types of sports daily. And in this country’s government constructed many gymes for free. The consequence of this effort is that, Japan becomw developed country quickly than other ones.

On the other hand, opposite to this idea which I mentioned above, paying too much attention and spending more money to sports by the authority is not always good opinion. Since, nit all of the individuals fitting for doing exercises. They may have a disability on their body. However, otherwise, they have to trained and taught at the same time. I real life, they may face to problems which can be done by mentally, in these situations they should address them by their intelligence. For example, as one of the famous athletics said, for beating your rivals, you have to think brightly.

In conclusion, I reaffirm my ideas that sports also ought to be admired, even so it is recommended that maintenancing balance between sports, education and health.

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