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Band 5+: Some people believe that governments should spend the money from taxes on healthcare services, while others think that this budget should be invested in other fields. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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İt is argued that governments ought to invest the money derived from taxes in the healthcare systems, while according to some, the tax should be spent on the other fields. I share the idea of proponents who think that the other systems do need investigation.

Talking about those who support that tax budget must be allocated to the healthcare field, they have some reasons, and one of them is the enhancement of healthcare services and tools. There are some hospitals which cannot provide people with a better quality of care because of a shortage of technological advancements to cure patients; since individuals want to be healed, they go overseas, where they can be cured as they wish. Secondly, in some areas of a particular country, there is a lack of hospitals, and hardly ever people can find a doctor nearby. Due to this, it would be awesome if the budget from taxes were devoted to solving this problem by constructing new hospitals in the area.

On the other hand, I would side with some who contend that the other fields such as education, technology, and business deserve investment to give society an excellent service. Take education system, some schools especially state schools in the countryside, do need sufficient equipment such as smart board and projector, and little money can superintendents not allocate to supply it; money came from taxes would be a great endeavor. Similarly, as for students in the villages and countryside, they are compulsory to go to schools which are located far away from their homes; It leads children to become exhausted on the road to the school building. Were a particular amount of money devoted to building school buildings, this would reduce school children’s burden.

In conclusion, although some individuals think that only healthcare systems deserve tax budget, in my opinion, proponents are also right insisting that this money may give benefits to the other fields as well.

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