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Band 4+: Some people believe that living in city is better while others think that it can be expensive. Discuss both view and give your opinion

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Opinions vary on the importance of studying history, with some argue learning is essential while others believe it is not important and not relevant to modern life. From my point of view, studying history is play very big role in our modern life as we can learn from past mistakes and improve our knowledge.

On one hand, studying and learning history might be is not important to us as nowadays many people cannot be history teacher or do not want to work in archeology. In this case studying history is not very important to us like we think

On the other hand, many people (including me) believe, it is vital to learn history as we can learn past mistakes and we try do not do it again. In addition, in these days for applying universities instead of only require IELTS and SAT certificates, also history play huge role to win big amount of scholarship. Furthermore, we can compare old culture to our new one and analysing it with knowing history

In conclusion, learning history does not do excess

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Overall Band Score

4.5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
history: 8
studying: 4
learning: 3
important: 3
learn: 3
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Task Response

4
The essay presents a clear position and explores both sides of the argument. However, the development of ideas could be more thorough and the supporting details are not always convincing. The essay falls short of the required 250 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The essay lacks a clear structure and the flow of ideas is sometimes difficult to follow. The use of cohesive devices is inconsistent and there are some grammatical errors that affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5
The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances of inaccurate or inappropriate word choice. The use of collocations and idioms could be more sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The essay contains a variety of grammatical structures, but there are several errors in grammar and punctuation that affect the clarity and fluency of the writing.

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