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Band 5+: "Some people believe that schools should focus only on academic subjects such as math and science, while others argue that schools should also teach non-academic subjects like physical education and cookery. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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While education system is developing fastly, many students are facing a lot of pressure to achieve success and ensure a well-paid jobs. For this reason, Some agrue that schools should focus on academic subjects like math and science, the others thinks schools should provide more subjects which is creative or physical such as art and physical education. In this easay, I argee that acadamic courses are important, schools need to teach a wide range of both subjects.

Firstly, The education system not only teaching acadamic courses, but also a wide range of pratical subjects. Although the fact that acadamic subjects will develop critical thinking and logical analysting, It can make students more and more unflexiable in team work and join the society. For example, physical education not only promote health, but also improve the teamwork skill. Futhermore, If cookery is taught, students would learn an great deal about nutritions and health in diet.

Secondly, Acadamic course isn’t essential for some students who are facing the financial problems and need a vocational skills to get a well paid job. For example, Marketing is a flied which require a lot of selling-skills and a litte of analysting skills, allow students can join a company to get paid. Futhermore, acadamic skills isn’t ensure success that’s why universities should teach practical skills. The recent reasearch show that a big amount of graduaters feel hard to find a job due to lack of essential skills. For instance, according to VietNamese news, there are 50 percentage of young people stuggle to get a suitable job.

In the conclusion, I believe that both subjects will play a important role for students, the Schools need to balance the subjects, creating more space for students to develop both creative and logical skills.

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