Intro: Some people argue that schools need only educate children’s theme which are useful to their future job, and moreover other subjects like music and sports are not essential.
Thesis: I agree that schools should focus only on career-related subjects.
Body1: One persuasive argument in favor of my viewpoint is that while children’s interested in music or kind of sports, they should go to the courses where teach about songs. In other words, if schools have music lessons, I think they are not teach well. So, this is the reason why I disagree with second view. Afterwards, subjects like English and Maths are useful for future job, not only for career ,It is essential for life too.
Body2 : Another compelling argument is that while people think subjects like music can help for future, I argue that if students focus only on job-related subjects like science, technology, or business, they will be more prepared for demands of the modern job market. This can increase their chances of getting a stable and well-paid job in the future. This is important because in current days money is everything.
In conclusion, i should say that ,I do not approve subjects such as music and sports should be at school, not only because it is wasting time, but they also should focus on their career opportunities. Moreover, today’s competitive job market needs people with strong technical or business skills.