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Band 4+: Some people believe that schools should only teach children's subjects which are beneficial to their future career and therefore other subjects such as music and sports are not important.

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In today’s globalized world,majority of people reported that school must be teach important subjects to children such as mathematics, history and English which would give more opportunities for their future career.For this reason,others are not essential in their learning period.Art,sport and music as an example.I completely disagree with this statement as learning only for future job can provide limited career skills reduced motivation as well as increased pressure.In this essay,I will declineate my reasons supported by relevant examples.

To commerce with,one reason why learning a number of subjects is bad that it increased pressure.That is to say,when teacher just teach about mathematics and foreign language to students,their minds is becoming weakening.Because it impact on children and adult while their growing age.In other words,nowadays parents control their children’s study whole day without break.As a result,these periods are to create numerous health problems and complaints.For example,children can face high level diseases,ranging from stress,obesity,headache and eyesight illnesses.Researchers reported that,anxiety and decreasing eyesight is recorded as a peak in China because of studying long hours in a particular field.If it were not for only quite a few disciplines many students would not have suffer from mentally and emotionally faults.

Secondly,it should limited career skills and reduced motivation and engagement.That is,when students focus on academic fields instead of their favourites should lead to misunderstandings and some negative ramifications.Not only existing motivation,but also they would not get enough fulfilment and success form their work.Additionally,sport and music play a major role children’s daily life which singing, listening or playing games with team encourage them to be better both at school and daily lifestyle.If it were not academic subjects,majority of students would have reach top stages in their liked field.

By way of conclusion,I completely disagree with this view.As I mentioned music,art and sport is essential sourse while their whole lifetime if we take everything into account.

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