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Band 4+: Some people say that devoting one's time to family activities is more important than spending time working. Others believe that dedicating one's time to work is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

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It is a popular belief that the time people spend working is more benificial than the time they spend interacting with their family. However, there is more persuasive argument that individuals should spends time with their family to build a strong emotional bonds and improver overall well-being.

On the one hand, dedicating time in working is necessary for financial stability and future security. This is because if they don’t ear a living, they will not demand their needs, especially education, healthcare for members in their family, so they need to work long hours at office to pay much money in living costs, or even children’s expenses at school. Furthermore, many occupations need to practice in many years before becaming a official career. For insance, doctors rarely come back to their home since they had to cure for many patients at hospital. Hence, they didn’t have much time to come back home with their wife and son. Even if their income is not high, but they always dedicate to their profession to have an overall hapiness and relaxing for their lovely family.

On the other hand, spending time with one’s family is more valuable instend of being stressful at their office. Additionally, it contributes more to individuals’ relaxation and it reduces amount of anxiety. Moreover, they can directly take care of their children and take much time to guide and teach their sons or daughters how to solve complicated schoolwork. For example, many women enjoyed staying more at home because they coud spend time for their own interests, and they also devote in looking after their children. It would bring a profound meaningful moment when being aside their family.

To sum up, while it is apparent that time used for working is sometimes crucial than family time, it is undeniable that enjoying family time is more significant and it should be a priority.

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