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Band 5+: Some people say that devoting one's time to family activities is more important than spending time working. Others believe that dedicating one's time to work is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

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It is a common belief that focusing on working is more vital. However, There is a more persuasive argument that people should spend time building the relationship between members in the family through family activities, because this will help them lead a happier life.

On one hand, spend time making money can strengthen family’s financial. This is because most issues happening in the family related to money , so if a worker cannot make a living, the overall happiness of their family cannot be ensured. Therefore, many people chose to pursuit their career and commit much of their time for it. For example, many entrepreneurs submitted that the high level of their concentration on working sometimes makes them miss out special events with their family. However, they suppose that it is a trade-off they must make in order to afford their children’s education as well as ensure a sustainable future for their family.

On the other hand, I believe that family activities are more valuable as it contributes to build a close-nit relationship among members in a family. Spending quality time with family strengthens interpersonal bonds, improves mental health, and nurtures a sense of belonging. For children, parental involvement in their lives can lead to better academic performance and emotional development. Furthermore, prioritizing family over work can prevent burnout and enhance overall happiness.

To sum up, while it is apparent that time used for working should be prioritized, it is undeniable that the happiness and relaxing time with the family is a crucial part in our lives.

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