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Band 8+: Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Others argue that teenagers shouldn't sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It has become a contentious issue whether teenagers ought to do part-time work along with their studies or whether it should not be done at the expense of their leisure time. Although people have distinct viewpoints, I believe that it is a matter of personal choice rather than a compulsion.

To begin with, the major benefit of working alongside study is that teenagers get an opportunity to earn a reasonable amount of money and become financially independent, supporting not only their education but also their family members. Moreover, working part-time assists them in learning management skills such as handling money, managing time, and maintaining a work-life balance. They start valuing money once they start earning. Furthermore, they can enhance their interpersonal skills, including cooperation, communication, discipline, teamwork, problem-solving, and decision-making, which are considered invaluable for long-term success. Additionally, if children work part-time while studying, they gain first-hand experience and are more likely to secure a job in the future.

However, opponents argue that adolescence is a precious phase of life and it cannot be regained once lost. Individuals may miss out on participating in extracurricular activities, which might hamper their holistic development and, consequently, lead to several health issues such as stress, pressure, and mental trauma.

In my viewpoint, a balance needs to be created between work and study. Young ones can work part-time if it does not act as a stumbling block to their overall growth; therefore, it should not be mandatory to work.

In conclusion, while working and studying simultaneously offer significant advantages in terms of supporting families and developing new skills, I believe that its potential negative effects on health and well-being make it less favorable.

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