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Band 5+: Some people think children have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In recent years, many people believe that children have the freedom to make mistakes, while as other assume that adults have to protect them. In my considered opinion, children should learn from their mistakes to being more independent, along with excessive children preventing may be beneficial in some cases, but may leads to demanding to someone’s assist and may destroy their self-confident in many critical moments.

On the one hand, preventing children may bring about many benefits as drawbacks. First of all, many guardians protect their children from making such mistakes to improve their life and health. Nowadays, excessive crime rates and many accidents are become the main target for adults preventing their children, as children making wrong select and choosing the incorrect way touching their life. For example, many people become criminal or consuming such drugs, which absolutely leads to profound damage of their well-being and contribute to addiction on such poison drugs, because of inadvertence of parents. For this reason, guardians should prevent their children for many circumstances.

On the other hand, excessive preventing may bring about many issues for children mind. Children should learn how to be independent and confident in some situations. For example, massive monitoring contributes to mental issues for children, as they become addicted someone’s assist and support, which destroy their self-confident. However, a judicious monitoring make a sense of preventing, at the same time boosting independent. Aforemeoned reasons, may not only be beneficial but also efficient.

In conclusion, althoughIn although preventing children from making mistakes can help protect them from serious harm and negative influences, excessive control may limit their independence and weaken their confidence. In my opinion, the most effective approach is a balanced one in which adults provide necessary guidance and protection while still allowing children the freedom to experience mistakes and learn from them. This balance helps children grow into responsible and self-reliant individuals.

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