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Band 5+: Some people think that it is more important to teach children how to be good members of society. Others believe that it is better to focus on developing the individual.

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Some parents opinion is shared to two sides, ones believe that they should taught their kids to be the part of people’s community, while the others think that kids should be focused on individual work. This essay will discuss both views and explain my own opinion.

On the one hand, kids should be part of society to develop their human sides and skills. Since the young age kids go to the kindergarten, after they go to school and other types of activities where they communicate with other people, especially one with their age. It is important to have a connection with people since the young age, learn new things for them. After, when teenagers communicate with other people of their age they feel themselves more comfortable and confident, they should have friends to share their ideas, interests and other. After school, some of them go to the university and the others need to work, and in the both ways they need to talk and be with other people or students. It makes them more confident and become free person.

On the other hand, people, especially parents want their children to be more individual and develop in this way. I also agree with this statement, because it is really important to be independent and individual in out society, and do not forget about their unique sides that they should cultivate. From young age, some parents want their kid to be competitive and do sports where they perform all alone, they think that it makes them stronger and more focused on themselves. It makes them productive and confident. Even at the older age, people compete with other in different ways, it starts from the young age.

In conclusion, i want to point that social values are important, to develop unique personality in each child. In my opinion, there should be balance between them and personal growth is really important in our society.

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