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Band 7+: Some people think that the main goal of school should be making children into responsible citizens and good workers, rather than benefitting them as individuals.

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The purpose of education in schools has been a contentious issue in recent years. Some individuals argue against the notion that schools are responsible for shaping children into responsible citizens and productive workers. In my view, the cultivation of personal values should take precedence.

There is validity in the argument that schools should prioritize the nurturing of individual values. Firstly, a comprehensive development approach enables children to accumulate diverse experiences, preparing them to navigate the complexities of the contemporary world. This approach not only equips them with essential skills relevant to specific fields but also allows them to explore areas of personal interest. Furthermore, it empowers young individuals to cultivate a broad spectrum of emotions, such as happiness and indignation. Exposure to a variety of emotions helps them identify their life passions, fosters confidence, and enhances their understanding of communal responsibilities.

Conversely, molding children into responsible citizens and efficient workers can lead to a stable financial and career trajectory. Nevertheless, fostering individual development also has the potential to accomplish this objective, or even surpass it, without imposing activities that are contrary to their preferences. For instance, children can discern their talents or hobbies, which can lead to sustainable employment with a commensurate salary. Subsequently, they can make positive contributions to society through their endeavors.

In conclusion, while the objectives of schools should encompass the formation of responsible citizens and productive workers, this aim should not eclipse the importance of personal development. Both schools and parents can institute changes to prioritize the cultivation of their children’s personal values while concurrently instilling a sense of civic responsibility.

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