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Band 9: Some people think the modern world we are more dependent in each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss the both view and give your own opinion.

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Some individuals argue that in today’s world, we rely more on others, while others believe we have become more independent. Personally, I strongly believe that people are more independent than in the past due to advances in education and self-awareness.

On the one hand, many believe that people today are more dependent on each other because of the overwhelming support they receive from their parents. This is especially true in families where parents have faced hardships in their own childhoods and want to ensure a better life for their children. As a result, children may be overprotected and receive excessive assistance, which can prevent them from learning essential life skills. For example, research from Harvard University shows that, following a war, Chinese parents who had experienced severe difficulties were determined to protect their children from similar hardships. As a result, many children became overly reliant on their parents, leading to higher unemployment rates in the country due to a lack of independence and self-reliance in decision-making.

On the other hand, despite these arguments, I firmly believe that people today are becoming more independent, thanks to the rise of technology and media. The vast amount of information available on the internet, including articles and educational content, teaches individuals the importance of self-reliance and independent decision-making. From a young age, children are educated to think critically and solve problems on their own. For example, in Vietnam, educational campaigns over the past few years have focused on promoting independence and discouraging over-reliance on others. As a result, the country has seen a rise in self-reliant individuals, contributing to Vietnam’s economic growth and its status as one of the fastest-developing nations.

In conclusion, while some argue that parental support has made people more dependent, I believe that today’s society fosters independence through education and the widespread availability of information. This trend is shaping a generation that is more capable of handling life’s challenges on their own.

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