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Band 5+: The graph above compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

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The presented two-line graphs are portrayed in one represent the accessible number of visits on the web. The period is 1 day gap. The y-axis is represented in thousands. For better convection, it is important to consider site-wise data.

Firstly, the starting number of visitors to the Pop Parade was 1,20,000. Secondly, from the second day to the fourth day, there were fluctuations up to the fourth day. Thirdly, there is a nosedive up to the fifth day. Then, on the ninth day, there is a sloping incline up to the eleventh day. Later, on the day of twelve, there is a slight decrease in the number of visits and plateau visits on the thirteenth day. Lastly, there was a slight increase on the fourteenth day, and it reached its peak on the fifteenth day.

On the other hand, the number of hits to music choices took a new peak to 60,000 on Day 3. On the fourth day, there was a steep fall to the number of visitors by 66%, to 20,000. There was a new peak to hits to the music choice site on the third day. On Day 13, several hits dipped slightly. The number of hits halved with a narrow margin from Day 4 to Day 11. Lastly, On Day 13, the number of site visitors soared slightly, before hitting a new peak of just 12,00,000 on Day 14.

To sum up, Music choice starting with 40,000 visits touched a peak three times the initial stage. On the fourth day, the music choice registered the rock bottom number of visitors of 20,000. The rock bottom visits of Pop Parade are 40,000 and reached four times of it on the fourteenth day with 16,00,000 visits.

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