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Band 5+: THE MOST IMPORTANT BENEFIT OF MUSIC IS TO DEVELOP PEOPLE'S BRAIN. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS VIEW?

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It is generally accepted that music has played an essential role in people’s brain development. I totally disagree with that point as music also has more significant advantages which are effected to society or our life.

On the one hand, music can really develop people’s brains. To be more specific, a group of experts at Havard University had proven

that upbeat music can help you think faster by promoting your brain cells. Besides that, music can also improve your concentration. Scientifically proven that brown sound contained in lofi songs or songs with adagio melody will make you feel peaceful, and relaxed and focus more on what you do.

On the other hands, the most essential benefit of music is not only develop people’s brains, it also brings other various benefits and plays as an active role in our lives, especially our mental health. Firstly, music is crucial in promoting social bonds and cultural identities. Through sharing musical experiences, people from anywhere, any countries can connect and share their taste in music. Secondly, music play as an active role in helping people release stresses after a long day of tired and depressed. Whenever you feel blue, just listening to music, your brain cells will stimulate and release dopamine which will boost your moods and your creativity.

In conclusion, i totally disagree with the view that the maost important benefit of music is to develop people’s brains.

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