Band 5+: WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Violence is intolerant act in any society, it has different degree of danger, it could start with verbal violence and goes to a crime. Some researcher made by psychologist conclude the reasons of this miss behavior among youngsters. They lost the emotional support from their parent, and they didn’t become sociable. Which I found also the mean causes this phenomenon.

Turning to the reason of the teenager are not becoming social. First, can be explain by the addiction to the screens, specially to the video’s games, which they spend hours playing forceful games. Due to the violent acts with there surrounding in school or at home. For instance, when I studied in primary school one of my collogue was admirer by spider man, so he tries to imitate him acts so he decided to jump from the windows of the classroom during the break.

Additionally, I believe the root cause of this issue lies in the significant social changes we have witnessed in the past decade or more. Today, both parents often work full-time jobs, spending long hours away from home. By the time they return, exhausted from their day, they struggle to fulfill even the most basic responsibilities at home, let alone dedicate themselves to their crucial role as educators and emotional supporters for their children.

As a result, parents have lost one of their primary roles in society: raising and educating their children. The time that should have been spent building strong relationships, teaching proper behavior, and understanding their children’s thoughts and feelings has been replaced by quick, routine tasks. For example, parents may rush to prepare dinner, supervise their children’s showers, and get them to bed as quickly as possible. These interactions, though necessary, lack the depth and emotional connection needed to instill values and provide guidance.

In conclusion, to addressing this social phenomenon, requires a collective effort from parents, educators, society to prioritize emotional support, getting out of isolation, and foster meaningful connections within families and communities.