On a scale of 1 to 9, give this essay a band score by using the 4 criteria in IELTS task 2 band descriptors and break down the over score into sub-scores for each criterion, provide feedback with specific examples and details for each criterion and tell me how to use your feedback in action to improve this essay to a band 8.

As the world become globalised , the eating habit of people are changing as well as facing with increasing demand for fast food which can help to cope with modern lifestyle.I believe,this is a negative trend as it is contributing the devastating effect on human health. Those popularity in fast food indy typically attract more […]