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Band 5+: A friend has told you that he or she feels lonely in their new city away from their family. Write to your friend, and ‐ Explain why people can feel this way ‐ Give some ideas on how to solve the problem ‐ Ask your friend to contact you and tell you if this works

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Dear Jhon,

I’m writing this letter regarding the situation you feel in your new city.

It’s completely natural for any human beings to get the home sickness as they spent most of their time with the family. So when they more to another city away from home and their love ones they started felling loneliness. This is also because of they have to adjust in new environment which they don’t use of.

I have some great ideas for you to get out from this problem. One of them is to join a community or a sports club where you can spent your time and make new friends. Another way to start any short course which can also help you latter in your professional life. It will significantly kill your spare time.

I would really want to know if this helps you to overcome with your situation. I’m be very glad if you write me back. And if you still not get over with it I’m always here for your help.

Best wishes,

Usama Ali

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The suggestions offered are practical and relevant. Minor improvements in clarity and conciseness would enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is generally understandable. However, some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect the overall flow and cohesion. Improved sentence structure and clearer transitions would significantly improve readability.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, but the range could be expanded. More precise and varied word choices would demonstrate a greater command of language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Numerous grammatical errors are present, impacting the overall clarity and accuracy of the letter. Significant improvement in grammar and punctuation is needed to achieve a higher score.

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