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Band 5+: You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Write a letter to someone you know who lives there. In your letter - ask them for help in finding accommodation - tell them where you would like to live - tell them the type of place you are looking for. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Tom

I’m very exited, I’m going to move to your city next week as a part of my job. You know me, I don’t like to ask anyone for a favor but you’re my best friend and between us there is no shame!!

First, I need a place to sleep, so I’m thinking of renting a bed room if this option is availabe. But it has to be near my new work site which is in the downtown, where I believe you’re do you live. Oh, befor I forget, the buliding has to be a pet friendly, because I’m bringing my cat Losy, I’ll attach a photo of her with this letter. Other thing, if possible; it’s better to be near a luandry, thus my work as an engnieer makes my clothes always dirty.

See you soon!!

Be save pal!

Your sincerely

Mo Shannan

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. However, the organization and clarity could be improved for a higher score. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, numerous grammatical errors and organizational issues affect the overall flow and coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Grammatical errors are frequent and detract from the overall clarity and accuracy of the letter. Improved grammar is needed for a higher score.

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