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Band 5+: Your uncle is coming from America. Write a letter telling him what do you want.

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I am very happy that you are coming from America. I am eager to see you.

My mother told that you are bringing a gift for me. First of all, I want to thank for you for bringing a gift. I would like a smartwatch as a the gift. There are many features in the smartwatch that can help me in studies and in my daily routine. The alarm, timer and stopwatch will allow me to see how much I have studied in one day.The heart beat, blood oxygen and sleep rate would help me to see my daily health records. It will also not distract me from studies as a smartphone does.

I promise you that I won’t use it in a wrong way. Seeing you soon uncle.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses the task by clearly stating the writer's desire for a smartwatch and providing reasons for this request. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter flows well, but there are some minor issues with sentence structure and cohesion that could be improved.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are a few instances where more precise or sophisticated language could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains some grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency.

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