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Band 4+: You are a football player,but you have to leave the team for a while.Write a letter to your teammate and say: why you have to leave...how much you love the football team...when you are coming back

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Dear Jass,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits.I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not be able to play for our team for sometime.Actually,my grandfather has met with an accident,I am going home to look after him.

You know how much I love football and our team.Moreover,playing football is passion for me and I like to play each and every match for my team.I enjoy a lot my game.However,everyone has some responsibility in his life and my family comes at first for me.To all it, my grandfather is the most important person in my life.But now he is in trouble and his left leg has broken in an accident.He needs good care and a lot of physiotheraphy,I can provide better than anyone else.

I will be back as soon as my grandfather is fit and able to walk on his own.It may take a few months to get normal,but I will comeback very soon.

Hoping to see you all very soon.

Yours truely,

Pawan.

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The letter effectively conveys the reason for leaving, expresses love for the team, and provides a timeframe for return. It fulfills the task requirements.

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