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Band 5+: Some people believe that students should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that cooperation is more important than competition. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowaday, we face with competitive society for social problems or economic problems that why most people should motivate themselves to achieve their goals. Most of countries have to challenge since they are children. The intention of this essay is to explain the two sides and give some my opinion that why I disagree with this intention.

In the one hand, some families think their children should be study in a high class school or the school where have a lot of famous or achieve people who graduated. Because of guarantee to their children have achievement in their life. However, acceptance to study is not easy, students should have extra tutor and lead them to stressful and pressure of themselves and also might effect to their developments because according to psychological development, children should have time to play with their friends, explore environment surrounding them and enjoy with their child live because they cannot get back this time for enjoying. When they grow up, they will have more responsibilities than at those times.

In the other hand, if students have only know about academic, they might be obstacle with connect with others, for example cooperation, communication skills. That is to say those skills are very important not only when they are child but also when they are adult too. Such as, in the future they work as psychologist, the basic of therapeutic factor is build rapport with clients, if they cannot do, it will impact to their roles and their job.

In conclusion, despite the fact that most of the world, especially in school, students have more competitive than in the past, if they only have hard skills or know about academic, it might be effect to them especially when working or play with their friends. In my opinion, I disagree with this intention because social is important for students too. They can learn how to communication, respect to other and relationship are more important for living peaceful and happiness.

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