Part 2

Band 5+: Describe your first day at school that you remember You should say:what you remember and when it washow you felt about itwhere the school waswhy you remember this day.

See all user-submitted answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were submitted by one of our users.

59% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.

Polished transcript:

Male Female

While I don't recall the exact date of my first day of school, I remember feeling a mix of excitement and nervousness. It was an incredible experience, much more than I anticipated. I woke up early that morning, around 7:30 am, got ready, and walked to school. My mom accompanied me, and I remember feeling a sense of anticipation. Throughout the day, I met new friends and classmates, and the teachers were friendly and welcoming. I was eager to learn, and school felt like a place where I could explore my interests. Everyone seemed different to me, from their clothes to their personalities. The bell rang for lunch, and I sat next to a girl at my table. We ate together and chatted. After school, I walked home with my sister and completed my homework. That first day at school left a lasting impression on me, and it's a memory I cherish.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

To tell the truth, I do not remember the day of my first day at school. But I felt exciting myself in that situation. The first day wasn’incredible than I think. In that morning. I walk upulated around seven point at 30 am. Um andr? Home brush to the school. My was treated a self YouTub camera? M in the day. I met lots of friends and ch meets and teachers teach from um breing. I had a passion to study and it was my favorite one. At that moment was everyone was, um. Different for me. Because they are not class. Uh. Closeothes or anything else. And the bell rang and we went to have a lunch. At this moment, I talk at a girl was sitting next desk and had a lunch together. After that, I went to home with sister and did my homework.

Tips: Click on each word to see feedback.

Speaking Time: 61 seconds

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

school: 5

first: 2

remember: 2

feeling: 2

walked: 2

their: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The student provides some details about their first day at school, but they could have elaborated more on their feelings and experiences. For example, they could have described the school building, the classroom, or specific activities they participated in. The student also mentions meeting new friends and classmates, but they could have provided more details about these interactions. Overall, the student's response is adequate, but it lacks depth and detail.

Fluency & Coherence

The student's speech is somewhat disjointed and lacks fluency. There are several instances of repetition and self-correction, which disrupt the flow of the response. The student also struggles to organize their thoughts and ideas coherently. For example, they jump back and forth between different aspects of their first day without a clear structure. The student could benefit from practicing speaking more slowly and taking pauses to gather their thoughts.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some instances of imprecise language. For example, the student uses the phrase "incredible experience" to describe their first day, but this is a rather vague and general term. The student could have used more specific and descriptive vocabulary to convey their feelings and experiences. Overall, the student's vocabulary is adequate, but it could be more precise and varied.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student makes several grammatical errors throughout their response. For example, they use the incorrect tense in the phrase "I walk upulated around seven point at 30 am." They also use incorrect articles in the phrase "My was treated a self YouTub camera." The student could benefit from practicing their grammar and focusing on using correct tenses and articles. Overall, the student's grammar is inconsistent and contains several errors.

Answers On The Same Topic:

Describe your first day at school that you remember You should say:what you remember and when it washow you felt about itwhere the school waswhy you remember this day.

I really remember my first day at school. It was like yesterday even though it happened many years ago. Uh, I was a little kid. Uh, I went to school with my mom with m excitement. Uh, it was a sunn morning in September, the start of new journey. Um, I felt a mix of […]

Band 7+

Describe your first day at school that you remember You should say:what you remember and when it washow you felt about itwhere the school waswhy you remember this day.

I really remember my first day at school. It was like yesterday even. It happened many years ago. I was just a little kid busing with extitement and the touch of nervousness. It was a sunny morning in September, the start of new journey. I felt a mix of emotions as I approached Des school […]

Band 6+

Describe your first day at school that you remember You should say:what you remember and when it washow you felt about itwhere the school waswhy you remember this day.

Okay. The first day of primary school is always a significant milestone in everyones s life and I still remember it privately, as though it happened yesterday. The school is located in the city cent centre, which is quite far from my house, so my mother took me to the school. Initially on the way […]

Band 6+

Describe your first day at school that you remember You should say:what you remember and when it washow you felt about itwhere the school waswhy you remember this day.

So when it comes to talking about my first day at school, uh, so I can definitely say that I can easily remember that day because that day was such a good and wonderful day of my life. And it was one of the most changeable days that I had. And um, because of a […]

Band 6+

See All

Describe a photograph or a painting you like. You should say What is depicts Who take / paint it How it makes you feel and explain why do you like this photograph/painting

Okay, I don’t really have a sense of understanding good paintings. That’s where I co-work with photographs and there’s just not one single photograph which I like to be really honest. There are a series of photographs of me hitting chin and as you heard these photographs are basically chin snapshots which I used to […]

Band 6+

Describe a short-term job you would like to do in a foreign country

From my childhood to present time I have never found any job in my life because recently I have completed my studies so that’s why I have never found it but in the future I would like to do one job which is none other than fast food industry because I have some basic experience […]

Band 6+

See All

Band 5+: Describe your first day at school that you remember You should say:what you remember and when it washow you felt about itwhere the school waswhy you remember this day.

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Describe your first day at school that you remember You should say:what you remember and when it washow you felt about itwhere the school waswhy you remember this day.

Describe your first day at school that you remember You should say:what you remember and when it washow you felt about itwhere the school waswhy you remember this day.

Describe your first day at school that you remember You should say:what you remember and when it washow you felt about itwhere the school waswhy you remember this day.

Describe your first day at school that you remember You should say:what you remember and when it washow you felt about itwhere the school waswhy you remember this day.

Other Topics:

Describe a photograph or a painting you like. You should say What is depicts Who take / paint it How it makes you feel and explain why do you like this photograph/painting

Describe a time you successfully overcame a challenge due to your creativity. You should say: - What the challenge was - What creative solution you came up with - What the result was And explain how this experience impacted your approach to future challenges.

Describe a short-term job you would like to do in a foreign country

Describe a time when you made a mistake that had a positive outcome. You should say: - What the mistake was - What happened as a result of the mistake - How you felt at the time And explain why the outcome was positive.

Describe a book that changed your perspective on something. You should say: - What the book was about - Why you decided to read it - What your perspective was before reading it And explain how the book changed your perspective.

Describe a time you had to adapt to a new and unfamiliar situation quickly. You should say: - What the situation was - Why it was unfamiliar - What you did to adapt And explain how you felt during that experience.

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium