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Band 7+: The past school plan and the future one to accommodate more students and add more buildings, car park and a road.

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The image depicts diagrams comparing school sites for 2004 and 2024; in 2004 there are 600 students, and in 2024, 1,000 students; in 2004 there is a car park 1 to the west, school building 1 to the northwest near the entrance, school building 2 to the south connected by a path to building 1, and a sports field to the northeast; in 2024 there is an additional car park 2 to the east, a new road leading from the northwest entrance to the southeast, additional school building 3 to the north side of school building 2, a relocated sports field to the southeast, and a path connecting school buildings 1, 2, and 3.

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The two pictures show a school’s site; one in 2004 showing the school’s site, and the other one presents the plan for changes to the school’s site in 2024.

It’s clear that there will be some huge changes to the school’s current site, the most important one is that the school will be able to contain a larger number of students because of the new building.

The school’s current site consists of two main buildings and a large sports field with a path between the main entrance and the sports field, and a single car park, making the school able to educate 600 students.

The new school site has three main buildings connected by a path, making the school able to receive a larger number of students; 1,000 students. Moreover, there will be a new road that connects the new car park with the main entrance and the old car park. In addition to that, the sports field’s location was changed to be south of the new car park with a significant smaller space.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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school's: 5

school: 4

sports: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main changes to the school site between 2004 and 2024. However, there could be more specific details included, such as the exact locations of the buildings and the relative sizes of the car parks and sports fields. To improve, focus on providing more precise descriptions and comparisons of the key features in both diagrams.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The information is presented in a logical order, comparing the 2004 site with the planned 2024 site. However, transitions between some sentences could be smoother to enhance the flow. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to further link ideas and improve the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a sufficient range of vocabulary to describe the changes to the school site. However, there are opportunities to use more precise and sophisticated language. For example, instead of 'huge changes,' consider using more descriptive alternatives like 'significant alterations' or 'substantial modifications.' Also, try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to site plans and layouts. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with only minor errors. The sentence structures are varied and generally accurate. To further improve, pay attention to the accuracy of articles (a/an/the) and prepositions. Also, ensure that verb tenses are consistent and appropriate throughout the report.

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