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Band 5+: You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no speciali st knowledge of the following topic. In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. You should write atleast 250 words.

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Nowadays, plenty of opportunities are available for paid work. Many people do the paid work as a part-time or full-time job. Children also work for paid services in many countries. There can be various opinions about the children’s involvement in paid work. Either it can be as a part of self-development or due to poor economic conditions or because of exploitation by officials or someone else.

In one way, Children should work for servicec. During the childhood, they are not aware of the importance of hard-earned money, intra-personal skills, self-development, etc. Hence, if children are kept engaged in some paid work, it would give them actual idea about the money. As they will earn the money, children will understand where this money should be used, whether for useless purposes or for any important stuff. In addition to that, children will get small but important life learning by working with the customers. Children will know that why this world is cruel and most of the time, people will shows selfishness and many other wrong attributes. So during childhood, they are not aware so if they go through this all stuff, it will help them to be strong. It will also teach them about earning and spending money on their own. Working will help them to learn about communication skills, dealing skills with people, and also self-development. So looking to all aspects, there should be some law for children to work for paid services during their vacation time. So by doing this, many children will also benefited by learning new skills along with learning money. There are many children who also need to work because of poor economic conditions. So this thing will surely help them to earn something for their families. But this paid work should be only during their vacation time, not during schooling time. Because education is also foremost important for the growth of children

In Conclusion it can be said that one thing should also be kept in mind that children should not be targeted forcefully to work. Children’s exploitation should not be done at any cost. All above-discussed idea are good for the children but only when their parents permits them to work during vacation time. This working for paid stuff will surely give some important learnings to the children about harsh truth of real world at very young age. Which is important as they will become more vigilant and intelligent during dealing with this real world.

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