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Band 4+: A bar chart shows the percentage of men and women in Great Britain who had driving licenses and another bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who were young drivers at the age of 17-20. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two bar graphs; first graph (left) representing percentage of men and women with driving license from 1976 to 2006, males 1976: 70%, 1981: 70%, 1986: 72%, 1991: 75%, 1996: 79%, 2001: 78%, 2006: 80%, females 1976: 30%, 1981: 40%, 1986: 50%, 1991: 53%, 1996: 60%, 2001: 53%, 2006: 60%, second graph (right) shows percentage of young drivers between 17-20 years old in 1996 and 2006, males 1996: 60%, 2006: 50%, females 1996: 40%, 2006: 20%.

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The chart below displays the several percentage of male and female who already have driver licenses in Great Britain,also another one describes whom had their licenses younger

Overall,two genders increased their number,but men are leading in the two case of transporting.Adult males increased their numbers only 10percentage over the 30 years,while females got up on 30percentages.

Plural number of woman driving in ages of 17-20 got totally lower than men from the years of 1996.Women showed a higher score in this year,but in the next chart we see them slowing down,what means their number got rarely lower.

Percentage of men and women driving in total instantly goes by leading males while female are getting better over the period.In the years of 1976 to 1986 shown of the percentage that not goes up,which says their number not growed.

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The report addresses the task but contains inaccuracies and lacks detail. The organization is not very clear, and the language contains errors. To improve, focus on providing more specific data from the charts, organizing the information more logically (e.g., by chart or by gender), and using more accurate and varied language. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, and there are instances of inaccurate word choice. The language used is not always appropriate for the task, and there is a lack of precision in describing the data. To improve lexical resource, expand your vocabulary related to describing trends, changes, and comparisons. Use a dictionary and thesaurus to find synonyms and alternative ways to express your ideas. Pay attention to the specific vocabulary used in IELTS writing tasks and practice using it accurately and appropriately.

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