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Band 5+: The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for their years 1980 and 2015.

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The image presents bar chart data on the percentage of female school-leavers entering higher education in 1980 and 2015 for five countries: UK (1980: 30%, 2015: 50%), USA (1980: 40%, 2015: 55%), Australia (1980: 60%, 2015: 58%), South Korea (1980: 10%, 2015: 40%), France (1980: 50%, 2015: 55%).

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The diagram ilustrates the data of a bar graph of women percentage, which took admission under univerisities in 5 different countries during 1980 and 2015. The name of these countries are Australia,France,South Korea, the United kingdom, and the USA.

According to the bar graph, in 1980, only the ten per cent female got addmission in higher education, while percentage was around 35% in the UK. Moreover, in 2015 percentage of female univerisities students were lower in South Korea, in contrast, higher in the USA and Australia, which were approximetaly 58%.

As the information is gathered from the graph, in 1980, the percentage was 50 in France, which is approximately same in 2015 in same country. In 1980, there was above 35 per cent females wanted to study further in higher institutes.

There is an interesting point, the percentage of women,in 2015, were same in Australia and the USA and same percentage of women was in Australia in 1980.

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The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The organization could be improved for clarity. To improve, focus on providing more specific data and ensuring accuracy in the reported figures. Also, try to group countries based on trends (e.g., increase, decrease, or stability) to create a more coherent narrative.

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The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information could be improved. Consider structuring the report with a clear overview, followed by paragraphs focusing on specific trends or comparisons between countries and years. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and sentences.

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The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the precision needed to accurately describe the data. Incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends, comparisons, and data analysis. For example, instead of 'got addmission,' use 'were admitted' or 'enrolled.' Also, avoid informal language.

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The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Focus on improving sentence structure and ensuring grammatical accuracy. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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