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Band 6+: The charts show the proportion of different modes of transportation used by city residents in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two pie charts on the proportion of different modes of transportation used by city residents in 2010 and 2020. For 2010, the data is: Car 50%, Public Transport 20%, Bicycle 10%, Walking 15%, and Others 5%. For 2020, the data is: Car 40%, Public Transport 30%, Bicycle 15%, Walking 9%, and Others 6%.

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The pie charts illustrate the rate of urban citizens’ mean of locomotives in 2010 and 2020.

Overall, car is the most common mode of transportation in both years, followed by public transport. The percentage of travelling by car and by walking decreased while that of bicycle and public transport rised.

Take a closer look at the charts, we can see that car and public transport are the domiant ways of transportation in 2010, with the percentage of 50% and 20%, respectively. Next, we have bicycle and walking at a less significant rate, the former at 10% and the latter at 15%.

However, in 2020, there is a drop in percentage of car and walking, which put car’s at 40% and walking’s at 10%. In the meanwhile, public transport rocketted to 40%, bicycle and others transport remained stable.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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transport: 5

public: 4

percentage: 3

walking: 3

bicycle: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the data and makes relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported, and the structure could be improved for clarity. For example, the public transport percentage in 2020 is reported incorrectly. To improve, ensure all data is accurately represented and consider a more structured approach to comparing the data sets. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report generally presents a clear overview and identifies key trends. However, the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider structuring the report with a clearer distinction between the overview and the detailed descriptions of each year. Transition words could also be used more effectively to link ideas and improve the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. While terms like 'locomotives' and 'domiant' are used, they are not entirely appropriate in this context. Using a wider range of vocabulary related to transportation and trends would enhance the report. For example, instead of 'rised', consider 'increased'. Instead of 'rocketted to 40%', consider 'increased significantly to 40%'. Also, 'mean of locomotives' is not a natural phrase; 'modes of transport' is more appropriate. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'public transport rised' should be 'public transport rose' or 'the use of public transport rose'. Also, 'walking's at 10%' should be 'walking was at 10%'. Correcting these errors and ensuring subject-verb agreement will improve the grammatical accuracy. Varying sentence structures would also enhance the overall quality of the writing.

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