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Band 9: The bar chart below shows the percentage of mobile phone usage for different purposes in the UK in 2009 and 2019.

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The image contains a bar chart showing the percentage of mobile phone usage for different purposes in the UK in 2009 and 2019. The percentages for 2009 and 2019 respectively were: Reading news, 35% and 58%; Gaming, 28% and 67%; Shopping, 23% and 75%; and Social media, 33% and 82%.
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The bar graph illustrates information about the percentage of mobile phone usage for reading news, gaming, shopping, and social media.

Overall, there was a significant increase in general phone usage in 2019, in comparison to 2009, and people used phones mainly for social media in both years.

In more detail, the percentage of mobile phone usage for reading news accounted for nearly 35% in 2009, while this figure constituted about 60% in 2019. The numbers for gaming were approximately a quarter and 70%, respectively, in 2009 and 2019.

Turning to other sections, phone usage for online shopping rose considerably in 2019 compared to 2009. The figures reached around 75%, rising from about 25%. Social media was the main purpose of mobile phone usage not only in 2009 but also in 2019. The proportion accounted for more than 30% in 2009, whereas it went up and reached just above 80% in 2019.

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Overall Band Score

9
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
phone: 5
usage: 5
about: 3
mobile: 3
social: 3
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Task Response

8
The report effectively summarizes the key trends and data from the bar graph, providing a clear overview of mobile phone usage purposes in the UK between 2009 and 2019. The overall trends are well-identified, and specific data points are used to support the observations. To further enhance the response, consider including more precise data references and ensuring that all comparisons are explicitly stated to maximize clarity and impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

9
The report is well-organized and easy to follow. The information is presented logically, and the use of cohesive devices is effective. Paragraphing is skillfully managed, contributing to the overall clarity of the report.

Lexical Resource

9
The report demonstrates a wide range of vocabulary used accurately and appropriately. There is a natural and sophisticated control of lexical features, enhancing the quality of the writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9
The report exhibits a wide range of grammatical structures used with full flexibility and control. Grammar and punctuation are accurate and appropriate throughout the report.

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